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Collage of Warm Illusions

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Collage of Warm Illusions

A squinting friend peers through a lens Along the aisle, a tri-pod bends around bouquets, and snaps a file of wedding guests An older brother, winks a smile, for in his eyes a warm embrace. He plays a trace of Bach, on his guitar Her younger brother sings along, and thinks of spars, high jinks, and pranks, her laughing face that sparked their childhood bond Her father ponders her first bike mosquito bites, her freckles and a scabby knee A fortress, high, among the trees where a princess climbed, to castles, fair where songbirds watched from cradled nests, above her braided hair He'd turn the world from end to end to spin her back to then again, .....but that was then.... ...and this is now...he must release her hand... And through my tears, a child I bore adores her knight, with eyes... in sight He waits for her. She lights a smile...... in satin slippers up the aisle He lifts a veil and they are more than what they were before ~ ~
____________________________________________________ Inspired by Craig's Contest:" A Collage Held Dear" 10/2/13

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  1. Date: 11/13/2013 11:42:00 AM
    Carrie---Such a well-written collage poem! Very heartfelt and sweet! Many congrats on your win in the contest...much deserved! Julie :-)

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 7:34:00 AM
    Carrie, I obviously liked this--thank you for supporting the contest with this fine poem.

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 12:13:00 AM
    congrats on your win, a lovely poem.

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 11:19:00 PM
    Truly deserving of a top win this is. BIG congrats for this wonder of a poem!!

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 9:02:00 PM
    Congratulations on the win, Carrie

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 7:25:00 PM
    So happy to win WITH YOU, I loved this the first time! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 5:58:00 PM
    Congratulations on your wonderful win

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 3:58:00 PM
    This is so wonderfully written, truly a winner and congrats!

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 1:28:00 PM
    This one gave me goosebumps. Beautiful! Congrats on the well deserved win :)

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 11:35:00 AM
    oh how we wish we could go back to that captured moment of time and make them children again...i love how you penned this piece...fantastic poem, fantastic win...congrats Carrie :)

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 11:17:00 AM
    I'm pleased this piece has been honored!

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 11:04:00 AM
    Brilliant! another big congrats. To my favs. BG

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 1:50:00 PM
    The rhythm of the poem is beautifully interesting. Very nice poem, with your collage of pictures - memories transfering your feelings to us. Bravo Carrie. :) G.

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 11:01:00 AM
    Astounding emotions...what a gripping end! "He'd turn the world, now end to end to pull her back to then again...but that was then" goodness.

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 11:02:00 AM
    a good expression about your past ! enjoyed your poems ! do comment on my latest one's too ! ..........Saanvi :p

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 10:10:00 AM
    Wonderful musings. My favorite pastime. Love, daver

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 9:39:00 AM
    This is such an amazing and layered piece of writing. Tou have given us all a gift.

  1. Date: 10/4/2013 10:35:00 PM
    I think these moments are a collage held dear for every parent....exquisite Carrie..

  1. Date: 10/4/2013 3:51:00 PM
    Great write! Good luck in the contest Carrie! Love, Juli-Michelle

  1. Date: 10/4/2013 12:10:00 AM
    this really sways with beautiful word choices, carrie.. SOUP MAIL!..:) hugggs