Collaborating In the Clouds

Why, it hasten As the clouds open Yes, I’m afraid, I got no appointment I need to acquaint My problems are hard to understand But just the same I’m emphatic and dream Somehow, many things happen There are lightning and thunders They resisted that I understand Here, it came a Helping Hand ‘though abandoned and denied Yet, I believe there’s heaven Maybe tomorrow it redeems And finally it enjoins to a meeting again.
Dalila Agtani 6/25/12 Entered in a contest sponsored by P.D. Contest Name Collaborating In the Clouds
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Date: 7/9/2012 1:54:00 PM
congrats Dalila on a most beautiful write and win for this theme of visual beauty in communion with God in the clouds luv.. magnifico work.. am dealing with concussion since a nasty fall last week so not able to be on computer but getting back slowly luv..
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Date: 7/9/2012 7:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in P. D.'s "Clouds" contest Dalila. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/9/2012 2:46:00 AM
a funeral pyre has to be lit at dawn, then by sunset it has to have consumed everything, so the only thing left are memories...David
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Date: 7/9/2012 1:36:00 AM
Dalila congrats on your win...David
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Date: 7/7/2012 11:53:00 PM
Dalila, congratulations with your beautiful collaboration in the clouds. Read every poem over and over. Thank you for the support, God Bless :-) PD
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Date: 6/27/2012 9:42:00 AM
Itoo think we gain a different perspective in the clouds or separated from what we experience now. Love your analogies for trouble and where our help comes from. It is a special poem and best wishes in the contest for you!>
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