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''Collaborating In The Clouds''

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''Collaborating In The Clouds''

~My agonized,withering body lay still in bed.
Death approaches,life hanging by a single thread.
Cast down twas light through shimmering clouds.
I knew,I could feel your shelter.
Afraid nevermore.
This last breathe,a last sigh.
To those with love,my bid goodbye.
Please don't deny me,but gratify me.
Only to long for righteous words.

~A Voice,pure as the heavens above spoke~

''Oh child,trust this temple as your home.
The tracing of years,your birth to full grown.
Embrace thy warmth of everlasting life.''~

written by,kaceymike29
Kacey Greenlee
for the Collaborating In The Clouds contest~
sponsor~pd~The Poet Destroyer~

Copyright © Kacey Greenlee

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  1. Date: 7/9/2012 2:00:00 PM
    congrats kacey on a most beautiful writ and win for this lovely theme of communion with God in the clouds luv..

  1. Date: 7/9/2012 7:10:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved placement in P. D.'s "Clouds" contest Kacey. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/9/2012 1:38:00 AM
    kacey congrats on your win...David

  1. Date: 7/7/2012 11:55:00 PM
    Kacey, congratulations with your beautiful collaboration in the clouds. Read every poem over and over. Thank you for the support, God Bless :-) PD

  1. Date: 6/25/2012 6:05:00 PM
    This is a great contest idea of PD"s and you and Mike did a doozy of an entry...There is something magical in poetry when a dialogue is involved...I gives more faces to the story I suppose....The last line gives me chills...Can't wait for Him to say that to ME someday...Go get 'em, girl. gwendolen

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 10:31:00 AM
    Good luck in contest Kacey...your words moved me this afternoon. Peace and blessings to you.