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Colder then Ice

The touch of a frost bitten hand makes me chill with a flare of passion. 
Death is my only friend and i cling to to this fact the cold over dose makes my body numb.
Warmth is like a blade to my skin it dosen't fit in to my life like most other things
Fire is an enemy i blame for many things. 

Colder then ice is my soul, passion only seems to come by bold out goings of standing in
twenty below, The danger of dieing lingers like a first kiss and a smile dances on my
lips, my eyes tweak with fluttered excitement. 

I feel weaker each day of summers breath breathing down my neck i wish the white winds of
winter would take me away a slip me into my cold shell once more.  

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  1. Date: 8/4/2009 8:37:00 PM
    I don't know where you reside Jeff! but here in Minnesota when the temp gets down below zero, oxygen is compressed! so when you breathe it in deeply, you oxygenate at a higher-level! (ertu, more energy!) like when you breathe the air around a waterfall! its all about the negative ions released in the air!! babyyyy!!!