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Cold Shoulders

Your
Passive
Aggressive
Snub burns me deep -
Your roll away from
Me blistering,
While I
Shiver
Cold

angstfree verse

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/19/2012 12:00:00 PM

Stopping by to say Thank You for your kind comments on my poetry Susan. It is a pleasure to read your writings. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/10/2012 1:41:00 PM

Susan, congrats on your win with this emotional write. Love, KIm

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/10/2012 7:14:00 AM

A belated congratulations on your well deserved placement in Brian's "Ten Lines" contest Susan. Love, Carol

Date: 4/8/2012 2:52:00 PM

Wow! a powerful write Susan, you don't candy coat it, very well done and congrats on your win. Alexa

Kash Poet

Date: 4/8/2012 12:44:00 AM

Beautiful poem Susan.Congrats on your win.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/7/2012 3:09:00 PM

Yeah! Congrats on this one AGAIN! It is gonna be a great Easter weekend...looks like u got bit by Andrea for the contest...go get 'em girl! Love, GWendolen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/6/2012 9:06:00 AM

Susan, you just got BIT by my BUG. See Linda's contest and my recent poem. Hope you can get on it right away. Luv ya, Andrea

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/2/2012 11:19:00 AM

This poem is stunning, Susan....it leaves a burning pain for the reader as well. *that is a compliment to the writer!:) Not easy to express such feeling in this format! Ps...many many thanks for my win in your contest...I'm deeply honored, and grateful. :) Thanks so much! Carrie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/29/2012 9:56:00 PM

ahhhh, now I see it and I understand from whence it came!! You created a great picture of emotional distancing. gosh, I am seeing some weird comments below here. and why is cindy lu telling us all goodbye? Does she know something I do not know???

The Situation

Date: 3/28/2012 9:17:00 PM

A n.ame change can mean so much.

The Situation

Date: 3/28/2012 4:23:00 PM

How quickly they tire

Judy Ball

Date: 3/28/2012 4:15:00 PM

Hmmmm Sounds familiar. A good write. God Bless, JB

Cindy Lu

Date: 3/28/2012 12:42:00 PM

excellent poetry. will miss ya dear poetess, left 1 standing..... :) when one door closes another opens ;)

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/28/2012 11:44:00 AM

Very sad. Thank you for noticing my typo. Love, Joyce

Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/27/2012 3:32:00 AM

This one flows well and has a powerful meaning...go get 'em, gal! Gooood luck. :) Gwendolen

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/26/2012 8:58:00 PM

Susan, this is the way my boyfriend made me feel today... aggressively towards everybody ..oh..well I stayed away from all ... enjoyed, have yourself a wonderful day~luv*PD :-)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/26/2012 7:57:00 PM

stated so emphatically Susan in short words for this new form ..solid and powerful.. good luck luv.. as far as my contest.. I am leaning more toward the inspiration Easter gives to a person.. the message of the cross is always the same focus but how does it relate to u and make your life fulfilled.. we already had the Easter Bunnies contest by Carol a few weeks ago so am looking for inspiration ..not religious.. but uplifting words luv..