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Cold October Night part 2- Legend of Fred

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Cold October Night part 2- Legend of Fred

The air was unusually cold that October night..
 as the children set out for a night of fright….
Dressed in their scariest and mysterious garb..
Running over driveways and yard after yard….
There were goblins, pirates, ghosts and a nurse
Werewolves and vampires that gave out a curse..
And of course the aliens of which there were six…
All screaming out for their bag of treats or tricks…
Some of the neighbors had set up a table..
With cookies and hot drinks and punch with a ladel…
For those that grew weary and chilled to the bone..
And knew it would be hours before they got home…
The wind started blowing, lightening lit up the sky…
That’s when they saw was huge and did fly….
What was that they asked..not sure what they saw..
It turned round and round and spun upside down..
When all of a sudden it stopped and just hovered…
That’s when they noticed it opened it’s cover…
Two very large Aliens from outer space did appear…
Come on children it’s time to go home…Bye ya’all…see you all next year….


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  1. Date: 5/16/2015 1:35:00 PM
    Couldn't find "Cold October Night part 1 . . . Oh, a true-blue flying saucer . . .

    force Avatar kj force
    Date: 5/16/2015 4:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    the Legend was the first in the series...cold snapped was 2nd..and there is a third/and conclusion...thanks for searching out some of my writes,,a real corker is The Garden Ruse 1 and 2 and Gator Bait about twisted !!!..thanks for reading and leaving comments.
  1. Date: 10/31/2013 1:32:00 AM
    I really enjoyed this halloween poem and then the surprise ending made it even better. Awesome!

    force Avatar kj force
    Date: 10/31/2013 1:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you so much, glad you enjoyed.. Happy Halloween !