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Cold and Light

God's work in progress
snow covered caps hit with light
the beauty of cold

introspectionnaturehaiku

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Harry Horsman

Date: 6/3/2010 8:37:00 PM

hi brandee thanks for your comments, i'm new and still woking my way through many of the poems on this site. this haiku really stands out, it's beautiful harry

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/21/2010 6:52:00 AM

The contrast you mention here is very effective, it's so nice to s e the beauty in everything...thanks for this uplifting haiku :)

Marty Owens

Date: 2/18/2010 6:09:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku and congratulations on placing in the contest...love your last line...Marty

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/18/2010 4:38:00 AM

Congratulations Brandee, on your placement in Raul’s “Sunrise” haiku contest. God gives wonderful gifts. How joyful it must be to Him when He is recognized. Your poem is beautiful. I can see why you are in the winners circle! Nice! Smiles, Dane Ann

Brian Strand

Date: 2/16/2010 3:11:00 AM

Lots of truth in your last line Brandee.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/15/2010 8:27:00 PM

My congratulations, Brandee, on your win in the contest! Great work. Peace, Audrey

Date: 2/13/2010 8:29:00 AM

What an inspirational view! Blessings to you for sharing it with us. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Enjoy your honor! Keep on writing. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/13/2010 6:58:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Sunrise contest Brandee. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/13/2010 6:01:00 AM

Congrats Brandee on your winning poem in the Sunrise contest.. a beautiful Haiku as I commented previously .. enjoy your victorious moment.. luv.. Linda-Marie..