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Coke Bottle Promises

Sandy grains wash over and over a discarded glass bottle leaving what is left smooth as silk to my fingertips touch like a childhood memory thought over and over once more and as I look out into the unyielding sea I recall your promise words I recall, over and over again like the waves splashing my tan feet upon the sands for you are overdue love to return to me as I kiss my love note to you and toss the bottle once more into the dark blue abyss below my coke bottle promise forever and only yours I do stay honest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/10/2010 1:27:00 PM
Nice one Miss Rose, i like the message you have here, a longing way to keep a promise.. A bit romantic, excellent on the words enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 7/10/2010 7:37:00 AM
Sweet romantic imagery Heather.. a darling poem .. enjoyed a wonderful read along with the other new writes today.. great to start my day off after along flight home.. thankxxx ..with luv.. ..oh have officially changed my name to read as I always sign anyway.. with luv.. Linda-Marie who is the..
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Date: 7/10/2010 2:43:00 AM
Very nice imagery. The words painted a picture that one could almost see as well as touch. Nice Work... Scott...
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