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Cocoon

. Every chrysalis A butterfly in waiting To sip buds' nectar *For Rick's Haiku You challenge

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Alan Reed

Date: 6/9/2010 1:44:00 PM

And heres to nature. A piece with lilac scent. Nice -Alan

Mac Mcgovern

Date: 6/7/2010 2:47:00 PM

A wonderful visual haiku. Vivid and creative. I believe I will add this to my favorite poem list. Thanks for sharing.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2010 9:23:00 PM

what a great entry this was. they seem to be getting even better down the list!! Luv, Andrea

Suresh Iyer

Date: 6/5/2010 9:36:00 AM

Butterflies are sweet. Your poem was equally sweet. Best wishes, suresh

James Fraser

Date: 6/5/2010 3:49:00 AM

Simply a write on nature at it's best >> James

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 6/3/2010 10:26:00 PM

Congratulations, Carolyn. I love butterflies and this lovely haiku. Excellent writing! Smiles, Dane Ann

Jayne Eggins

Date: 6/3/2010 8:15:00 AM

loved this one ... its touching on the profound dear lady there is no lack of depth in your work thanks for the comments on my poem much appreciated love Jayne

Amy Green

Date: 6/2/2010 3:54:00 PM

And you said, "I don't like deep poetry".... YEAH sure, whatever!!! I have yet to read anything "superficial" by you. Congrats on your win!

Rick Parise

Date: 6/2/2010 2:44:00 PM

very nice Carolyn , congrats on your placement~~Love and light , Rick

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/2/2010 2:39:00 PM

Yeah Carolyn another winner. I cant keep up with your wins..but know that I am thinking of you and am very proud of you. write me...BG

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/2/2010 12:05:00 PM

Carolyn, this is an an amazing Haiku. I think it will be in the winners circle for sure. Love, carol

Winston Q Niles

Date: 6/2/2010 7:28:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your words, love the minimalism of Haiku. Keep the good words rolling

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/1/2010 10:06:00 PM

A wonderful thought for haiku with nice images. Good luck

John Loving Iii

Date: 6/1/2010 6:13:00 PM

talk about gravy! jhl

John Rhinem

Date: 6/1/2010 6:01:00 PM

Smile! Wow, it felt like You were almost whispering this beautiful thought into my ear as I read it--The true sign of a very lovely and gifted poet and poetess extroardinar!! ~ Smile, what's going on over at that east coast land dear lady? Smile, because, I am sensing something very beautiful indeed; hmmm!? Smile, I love once more "Your Beautiful Hearts Reflections" here dear; very very pretty!! ~ Again, "My Love To You Always," John! ~ Smile, "See You Soon, Lovely Lady," Bye!:)

James Peranteau

Date: 6/1/2010 5:49:00 PM

This is very beautiful Carolyn ! Noah has a great fasination with butterflies and he will love this one when I read it to him ! TY ! james

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 6/1/2010 4:54:00 PM

anticipation?

Derrick Burton

Date: 6/1/2010 3:23:00 PM

Hello, saw this mind as I read it and really enjoyed the image it gave me. Thank you for the read and have a great day.:) ps, its hot!!!

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 6/1/2010 2:49:00 PM

Glad to see you posting Carolina,that cocoon,and that butterfly in waiting . .what a beauty you captured. .Hugs C

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/1/2010 2:43:00 PM

I love this, Carolyn, and thanks for commenting to my blog. I have so many contest winners I want to see, but just no time to do it! Good luck in this contest. LUv, andrea