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Cloudy with sunny periods

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Cloudy with sunny periods

A white spot in the clouds,
a sunflower heavy with seed,
grass too long, should I mow it,
and a blackbird’s wing colours red,

limps on the path and if heavier  
crisp snail shells would echo each skip.
Draco, the tomcat eyes me pleased:
only the blackbird bleeds to death.

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  1. Date: 10/15/2010 5:20:00 AM
    Starting my weekend early reading all the amazing poetry of all the wonderful poets here at PoetrySoup. I am so happy to find your poetry posted here this morning Jan. Have a wonderful weekend and I hope you find tons of inspiration along the way as Fall is upon us. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/14/2010 1:00:00 PM
    I'm all smiles. Thank you guys!

  1. Date: 10/14/2010 5:14:00 AM
    And dying it wonders/ Was it all a season in the head/ Or is so beautiful/ Draco sniffs the night/ Its featherless flesh/ ... sorry, I am so seduced I could not resist rubbing each word with my hand.

  1. Date: 10/14/2010 5:03:00 AM
    Very creative and impressive write with nie images, Jan