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Clouds Passing

I looked at the passing clouds
That have carried my dreams away;
The wind that blows sadly knows
That dreams can seldom stay.

Each dream of you that disappears
Carries away a piece of my heart;
And all that I feel became so real
That it is tearing me apart.

Still my heart is longing
As it has from the very start;
To feel the love that we once had
Together as a masterpiece of art.

With each passing cloud
My thoughts slowly fade away;
Longing to see you again
With each new passing day.

A collaboration with Dan Kearly and my thanks 
to him for his wonderful contribution.

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  1. Date: 7/21/2012 9:46:00 PM
    Another fine collaboration! I enjoy his poetry, too, and your joint venture, though sad, is well put together. First verse and last verse reference to clouds increases the sense ofn longing.

  1. Date: 3/16/2012 9:01:00 AM
    Loveland is surrounded by an ocean of tears, eh Liz. Love, daver

  1. Date: 11/22/2011 12:05:00 PM
    Smile, Nothings Passing Away * How Could It * When Beauty Breathes Sooo Deep * My Luv, Always & Forever, John!!:) *

  1. Date: 10/24/2011 3:25:00 PM
    very charming! light & love

  1. Date: 10/13/2011 8:31:00 PM
    written by two who knew what to do. as in the third verse= together as a masterpiece of art"

  1. Date: 10/7/2011 11:30:00 AM
    Empathetic souls writing in tandem. A nice piece of Synchronized poetry writing! xoxo Robert.

  1. Date: 10/6/2011 2:15:00 PM
    On the contrary my friend, somebody ought to cheer you up :) About the poem, simply remarkable, as always is with you.

  1. Date: 10/2/2011 9:29:00 PM
    nice going guys. Great job of it. You did get my soup mail the other day right Elizabeth? I neglected to tell you you had soup mail at the time. Great job on the collab

  1. Date: 10/2/2011 5:41:00 PM
    Very nicely done my friend. Lots of great emotion. God Bless, JB

  1. Date: 10/1/2011 10:53:00 PM
    Really Clouds passing, worded nicely and I have enjoyed nicely too, my friend. Thanks for sharing and for giving comments on my poems Dream and Light is Ever Green. bl

  1. Date: 10/1/2011 7:14:00 PM
    beautiful dance shared by two of my favs...enjoyed bunches, john

  1. Date: 10/1/2011 3:23:00 PM
    A lovely poem here Elizabeth.Enjoyed this collab.write very much.

  1. Date: 10/1/2011 1:47:00 PM
    What I wonderful write Lizzie! You both wrote so eloquently and soft, precious! Great rhythm and soul to this piece! I love it!!

  1. Date: 10/1/2011 12:38:00 PM
    This is another collab that I have read that I never wouldn't even know it was one if it weren't for the note at the bottom... this is just lovely, Lizzy (eep! *blush*! sorry I believe I have been typing your nickname wrong?? sorry again...) -- sad yet has such a wistfulness about it, those passing clouds...

  1. Date: 10/1/2011 11:55:00 AM
    Beautiful poetry. Tony

  1. Date: 10/1/2011 8:33:00 AM
    A very creative poem,, E.W., and Dan.,.. i enjoy both of you,,, How are you by the way?.. Clouds are amazing pass me by's.. especially when in need of healing,,certain,, movement here reaches my heart,. take care,..p..d

  1. Date: 10/1/2011 2:38:00 AM
    Very nice Elizabth. The rythym was just a tad off but the poem was great. Good thought. Good imagery. Good design. Good read. I wouldn't mind collaberating with you if you ever run across a stumblig block on another good poem. Keep up the good writing. Rockman :-)

  1. Date: 9/30/2011 9:55:00 PM
    Beautiful. I like it a lot.

  1. Date: 9/30/2011 8:50:00 PM
    Right on liz, keep it flowing!

  1. Date: 9/30/2011 7:56:00 PM
    Another beautiful melody of words you have written. :-)