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Clouds in the Corner of my Eye

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Clouds in the Corner of my Eye

I look up, what do I see above me
Cloud formations shown in awesome new ways
Always different the clouds I sure see
Layers upon layers they sit, portray
I lift up my cares and glories away

Beautiful yellows and greys together
With a little peach mixed simply within
Light in the corner of my eye gathered
Brings awe and splendor reflects off my skin
The clouds leave my life totally open

Russell Sivey

Contest: CLOUDS |
Sponsor: Barbara Gorelick


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  1. Date: 8/31/2013 9:02:00 AM
    Russell, the poem amazingly opens the sky and imagery.. congratulations with your wonderful winning poem... Linda

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 11:53:00 AM
    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 6:46:00 PM
    russel Congrats to you on your win. Morgan

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 8:59:00 AM
    Such an uplifting view you have given me of the cloudy sky !! Loved it!

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 12:40:00 AM
    Congratulations on your place on the winners list Russell xx

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 8:29:00 PM
    A lovely win Russell, ~Love ~~SKAT

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 8:24:00 PM
    I would love to go cloud watching with you...congrats on your win in my contest. BG

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 5:04:00 AM
    Poets have a way to say what Robert Frost advises to say the common in uncommon ways and that the aim of a poem is song. The line ...Light in the corner of my eye song! The little mountain cloud has been festering in my mind for a haiku form, originally I composed a tanka: I wath clouds merge/one into one bigger one/giving themselves up/forgettinhg what was/for what is. Thank you both for loving my little cloud. Haiku become alive to me as I see them living in my heart's eye.

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 12:35:00 PM
    Beautiful sir

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 9:31:00 AM
    Your poetic palate has a thing for the clouds & sky, doesn't it? :) This was another beautiful piece.

  1. Date: 8/18/2013 7:16:00 AM
    Pretend I'm sitting next to you enjoying the scenery, cause that what friends do they share their cloud, Nice to hear from you, hope the family is on the mend, R, sending my love and peaceful thoughts of the day xxxx

  1. Date: 8/18/2013 6:45:00 AM
    Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this one today..I need to check this one out for we have clouds and again more clouds..The fog hangs heavy and the dampness fill the eaves..The ground squishes with every touch of animal feet..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 8/17/2013 11:52:00 PM
    Russell , I liked the way you have painted everything around the clouds . A great entry for the contest. Cheers !