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Closing Time

The fall begins a time of day that twilight time sublime with lavender hues. The curtain collects thoughts of a day. Sky darkens gray, slowly ever slowly closing, and the darkness becomes a pitch of navy blue with an intense hue close to a blackness before a twinkling appears and this fall of the day is complete. for Laura McKenzie's "Beyond Nightfall" contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/19/2010 11:35:00 AM
really good imagery in this write. i really like it. autumn page
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Date: 3/16/2010 2:38:00 PM
This is a very warm, colorful and inspiring poem, Sue! I received your card today and wanted to thank you for being so thoughtful. I appreciate it and hope you enjoy the book! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/11/2010 4:03:00 PM
What an insightful poem! Nice use of color and other imagery. Keep up the good writing! Best wishes in the contest. Karen
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Date: 3/5/2010 6:30:00 PM
such a heart breaking time thank god i own a bar and its midget free nothing worse than a bunch of worked up little people dont be fooled they can overtake even the strongest man great job here and really liked this write Gonzo
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Date: 3/2/2010 10:52:00 AM
enjoyed reading today, great way of describing the evening.
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