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Closing Time

The fall begins
a time of day
that twilight time
with lavender hues.
The curtain collects
thoughts of a day.
Sky darkens gray,
ever slowly closing,
and the darkness 
becomes a pitch
of navy blue
with an intense hue
close to a blackness
before a twinkling appears
and this fall of the day
is complete.

    for Laura McKenzie's "Beyond Nightfall" contest

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  1. Date: 3/19/2010 11:35:00 AM
    really good imagery in this write. i really like it. autumn page

  1. Date: 3/16/2010 2:38:00 PM
    This is a very warm, colorful and inspiring poem, Sue! I received your card today and wanted to thank you for being so thoughtful. I appreciate it and hope you enjoy the book! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/11/2010 4:03:00 PM
    What an insightful poem! Nice use of color and other imagery. Keep up the good writing! Best wishes in the contest. Karen

  1. Date: 3/5/2010 6:30:00 PM
    such a heart breaking time thank god i own a bar and its midget free nothing worse than a bunch of worked up little people dont be fooled they can overtake even the strongest man great job here and really liked this write Gonzo

  1. Date: 3/2/2010 10:52:00 AM
    enjoyed reading today, great way of describing the evening.