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Closer Than a Kiss

The ghosts of Gods long past reclaim
the mind and heart of lovers plain.
Wreathed with arms and eyes aflame
and lips which kiss, yet long in vain
for heavenly love one must abstain.

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Heather Ober Date: 1/9/2013 9:12:00 AM Beautifully written! I'm faving this one - I just love your word choice and imagery. Congrats! Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 1/9/2013 2:10:00 AM Belated congratulations on your winning spot Debbie love xx Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/19/2011 4:53:00 AM Congratulations Debbie on your well deserved 1st place win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "God, Ghost, and Love". Love, Carol Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 4/16/2011 1:04:00 PM Many congrats on getting the number one spot again : ) Login to Reply

Mitch White Date: 4/16/2011 6:53:00 AM This is nicely put, congrats on your win and praise God Login to Reply

Dr Hitendra Mehta Date: 4/16/2011 3:28:00 AM Many congrats Debbie for topping the list of winners in Dr Ram's contest. Ghost of God........interesting. Luv & best wishes always - Hitendra Mehta Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 4/15/2011 8:47:00 PM Yeah Deb I get it now. For heavenly love one must abstain. Warmest congrats for this super win dear. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/15/2011 5:53:00 PM YOur gorgeous poem at the top. Congratulations, Debs, WELL deserved! Login to Reply

Elaine George Date: 4/15/2011 5:16:00 PM I knew this would take first place, Deb. How could it not? Just awesome! Many congrats!!!! Lainie Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/15/2011 4:02:00 PM Congrats Debbie on your first place win luv.. way to go my friend.. awesome ... Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/15/2011 3:10:00 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 4/15/2011 2:43:00 PM Congrats on first place in Ram's contest, with this wonderful Quintain~~ Login to Reply

Gautami Phookan Date: 4/15/2011 11:30:00 AM This was a very beautiful entry into the contest.Many Congratulations on your 1st place win Debbie.Love, Gautami Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 4/15/2011 10:04:00 AM Yahooooo!! Heavenly take on this contest!! Number One ...Yes!!! Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 4/15/2011 8:18:00 AM Congratulations on the first place win in my contest, Debbie Login to Reply

James Foulk Date: 4/7/2011 11:39:00 AM yes good luck in your contest this was a great read, enjoyed it. thank you for reading Go To Sleep and for your comment, yes he does, but he also smiles at all of my jokes, it does not take much for him to smile, thank you for your support. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/6/2011 3:10:00 PM Good luck in the contest with this very excellent work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/6/2011 8:59:00 AM Exquisite in a word Debbie... amazing lines penetrate the soul of the reader luv..good luck in the contest with this rare beauty entry ... Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 4/6/2011 6:38:00 AM Soup Mail!!!!!! Login to Reply

Elaine George Date: 4/6/2011 1:01:00 AM Wow!!! I think I will pass on this contest. This simply blows me away. Lainie Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/5/2011 10:26:00 PM wow, you did very well with this theme, I feel like it should be so simple and yet nothing is coming to me for this one. Hope this does well, Debs.btw,it's not my neck, but my shoulder. To shoulder doctor I now must go! Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 4/5/2011 1:58:00 PM Thanks for the entry, debbie Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 4/5/2011 1:53:00 PM whoo, like how you turned this around, debs... temptation...ggreat job! winning's best to you!:) huggs Login to Reply