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Clockwork

Just three hours, to the dot, From when my breakfast ends, Some hunger pangs begin And their intensity ascends. It doesn’t matter what I eat, Though I have my routine; My body runs like clockwork Or a well-maintained machine. Assuaging all that grumbling Doesn’t take a three-course meal; A little snack is quite enough To set an even keel. Three hours hence, it starts again And so I nosh or graze. A token nibble shows who’s boss; My stomach then obeys. I’m fortunate my hunger pangs Are never that severe, For after several morsels They just seem to disappear.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/17/2013 12:35:00 PM
Somedays the clock is right on time and hunger rings the bell. Other times it seems that things are just going to hell. With no time, even to take a breath. You don't realize your hungry till your darn near starving to death. Please forgive the bluntness, it's just how it came out. A rhyme sometime dictates the verse to say what it's about.
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Date: 6/14/2013 6:18:00 PM
This is great Ilene. It put a smile on my face and laughter in my breath. I praise you on your excellent rhymes. I love reading them but I hate writing them. They give me headaches- too much thinking. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 6/14/2013 1:16:00 PM
Ilene, some people will say it's a blessing when it goes like clockwork. No nasty surprises ;) I enjoyed this. Thank you for always dropping by on my side of the world ;) enjoy the weekend ahead!
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Date: 6/14/2013 11:26:00 AM
Yes, there seems to be a lot of that going around.... lol...I really enjoyed this one.... Jake
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Date: 6/14/2013 11:09:00 AM
oh still laughing, this is so good love it ilene xx
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