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Cleansing

Breath the sigh of relief coming from the trees out of the threat that they might be perish by the mighty race Inhale that celestial wind whirling and whistling Smelling now of the souls it sweep along the way to replenish your spirit Inhale the scattered fragrance of God, it's the smell of life Feel its sweetness its vigor seeps within you Drifting in blood as it passes your heart, Sense its cleansing power as it washes the stains of your soul and slowly oust the residue Run to the river and in the rustling water gushing forth from the breast of earth Dip your feet Listen to their scintillating murmurs the message is sailing with their rhythm they speak: "We flow to wash away your regrets and sorrows" Let their cleansing current dilute the angst of your spirit Embrace the streaks of the dawn's sun Relish his bold rays as it vaporize your insecurities and fears Sheding light to your shadows who's chasing after you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/22/2010 1:23:00 PM
You can feel the Cleansing of the soul in every stanza, brilliant poem, enjoyed,..pd..
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Date: 6/19/2010 6:01:00 AM
Very descriptive and emotive write that you have penned in this one...I am like James in that the fourth stanza shines but I like it all.Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 6/19/2010 5:48:00 AM
Hi Juan! stanza 4 is inspired!!! great work! your mind flourishes! jimbo...and thanks for your comments!
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