City City

city, city how can this be? my hair a mess lips stick missing everyday I wake I wish to be in bed. My worst days are those I approach moments ahead. :-)

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Robert Johnson

Date: 3/23/2014 8:13:00 PM

Well your avitar is working. :) Certainly got my attention. Now put those legs to good use and walk all over the City.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/7/2014 8:25:00 AM

Boy, I can't believe it has been so long since we communicated. thispoem is from way back in last year and I still had not seen it. I sure do like it, Sandy. HOpe to see more poems from your quill,

Justin Bordner

Date: 2/22/2014 2:12:00 PM

The City can eat you alive, so go on and eat as much of it as you can. Sometimes I just want to sink too, but my heart jumps too much. Good psychology. J.A.B.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/11/2013 2:34:00 AM

deep, stopping by a second and third time.......saying hi,,,,........where IZ U???? .... xoxoxoxoxoox ;-)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/22/2013 6:19:00 PM

beautifully penned

Ifeanyi Bob Ekechukwu

Date: 10/7/2013 3:33:00 AM

Please I would love you to visit my poems,my latest poem seed of friend its my acrostic. Will be honored.

Ifeanyi Bob Ekechukwu

Date: 10/7/2013 3:31:00 AM

Nicely done with deep meaning,kudos to you. Hope you find your lipsticks. The best.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/29/2013 2:02:00 AM

wonderful snapshot of a day with words that really sway, sandy...a delight to read in its brevity..:) hugggs

Ken Carroll

Date: 9/26/2013 11:37:00 PM

Hi Sandy, Nice slice of life poem here..Thanks for visiting my verse and the lovely compliment.. Ken

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/31/2013 9:25:00 AM

love the poem..soup mail...

Tim Ryerson

Date: 8/3/2013 4:36:00 PM

So right you are Sandy...I get up two hours before I go to work, giving me plenty of time to grumble, mumble and moan...Hey, you look familiar, weren't you in a movie or something?...May I have your autograph? It's for my daughter...

Richard Ferry

Date: 7/23/2013 1:31:00 AM

Can`t be that bad .....

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 7/19/2013 8:37:00 PM

Aww...sad...I liked the verse though. Too much in the city life can be deplorable. Time to get ome fresh air. Like the smile at the end. :) Always, Laura