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City City

city, city
how can this be?
my hair a mess
lips stick missing

everyday I wake 
I wish to be in bed.

My worst days are those I approach
moments ahead. 


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  1. Date: 3/23/2014 8:13:00 PM
    Well your avitar is working. :) Certainly got my attention. Now put those legs to good use and walk all over the City.

  1. Date: 3/7/2014 8:25:00 AM
    Boy, I can't believe it has been so long since we communicated. thispoem is from way back in last year and I still had not seen it. I sure do like it, Sandy. HOpe to see more poems from your quill,

  1. Date: 2/22/2014 2:12:00 PM
    The City can eat you alive, so go on and eat as much of it as you can. Sometimes I just want to sink too, but my heart jumps too much. Good psychology. J.A.B.

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 2:34:00 AM
    deep, stopping by a second and third time.......saying hi,,,,........where IZ U???? .... xoxoxoxoxoox ;-)

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 6:19:00 PM
    beautifully penned

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 3:33:00 AM
    Please I would love you to visit my poems,my latest poem seed of friend its my acrostic. Will be honored.

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 3:31:00 AM
    Nicely done with deep meaning,kudos to you. Hope you find your lipsticks. The best.

  1. Date: 9/29/2013 2:02:00 AM
    wonderful snapshot of a day with words that really sway, sandy...a delight to read in its brevity..:) hugggs

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 11:37:00 PM
    Hi Sandy, Nice slice of life poem here..Thanks for visiting my verse and the lovely compliment.. Ken

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 9:25:00 AM
    love the poem..soup mail...

  1. Date: 8/3/2013 4:36:00 PM
    So right you are Sandy...I get up two hours before I go to work, giving me plenty of time to grumble, mumble and moan...Hey, you look familiar, weren't you in a movie or something?...May I have your autograph? It's for my daughter...

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 1:31:00 AM
    Can`t be that bad .....

  1. Date: 7/19/2013 8:37:00 PM
    Aww...sad...I liked the verse though. Too much in the city life can be deplorable. Time to get ome fresh air. Like the smile at the end. :) Always, Laura