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Chronic Pink

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Chronic Pink

~~Chronic Pink~~ 
(Parents Peril * The Nightmare)


Evil sits and whispers -sweet lullabies
Chimes within my head,
I feel damnation scratching at my conscious
Of what was and is!

ASLEEP……………….

Water running down my toes
Rain taping at my windowpane
I fear; I’m reliving my childhood days
~~Dark April showers have a chronic look~~
Motioning me to escalate before daybreak, to face a colorless what!


The trickle of musty wind mesh under my skin
The panics initiates,
But all I conquer and collect is a gash of movement that very moment

SLEEPWALKING……………….

Feelings and wants exist inside my head
Visions of slitting my wrist from end to end
My  subconscious is no longer my friend
At night, praying is what got me through the dark-mares.
I held my own hand that very night
Telling myself it would be all right

EYES OPEN WIDE……………….

Walking down the narrow hall
These Chimes, these Chimes!
Grew with entanglements of crime
In my parent’s room, is where the lullabies were coming from?
Shhh!!! Hush now, I’m humming to the evil sweet chant… 
Whispers of dust suddenly stop
The envelope opener, I punch in and out each neck
One by one, they look up to only see me
A demonic child’s laughter erupts
Chronic Pink escape…

Pacing myself off the bed
I did not realize at that moment of what I've done

Cries of nothing led me back into my room.
There and only there water still sits under the sheets
The emptiness in my head was a sign that finally I can go back to sleep.
Falling asleep too the quietness that spilled around me
Waking up to, the parents peril sight every night

My subconscious held no sympathy
But, my chronic pink eyes relive this everyday memory

I cannot stand this….
Once again, I begin to hear the sound of scratching violins
Where dreams of ANGELS come in Chronic Pink.


by;pd
9/10/2012 

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  1. Date: 9/10/2014 6:53:00 PM
    No one is going to find me in here so I can safely say TAG YOUR IT!

  1. Date: 4/27/2014 12:17:00 PM
    PD Such a deep, powerful and emotional write. Filled with pain and feeling. Thank you for the great comment on my It's Painful poem.

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 11:50:00 AM
    I love the way you veer away from the expected......all that we expect in pink Is deliciously waylaid........only one PD. Hugging you......SuZ

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 7:14:00 PM
    Certainly a different slant on the angelic color pink. Worth another read. Congratulations. Love, joyce

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 7:13:00 AM
    My belated big hearty congratulations on your awesome win and again in this stupendous write of yours my dearest sis! Cheers and big hugs! By the way, I think I've missed to thank you for my awesome wins in your two latest contests. Thank you, thank you thank you ever so much!! I'm so glad you liked my simple poems. More hugs! Have a great weekend to u and your love ones! lovem4evr, your poetsis & friend, Leo

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 12:50:00 PM
    sis~~loving the pink thoughts from your pen. Nice win.......... SKAT~~

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 12:10:00 PM
    Congratulations on your excellent win friend PD :) cheers!! :) have a nice day!!

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 8:41:00 PM
    yeah me! did not expect this one.. thanks Anthony... xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 5:04:00 AM
    - Always enjoyable to read your poetry - Today I want to congratulate your winning poem Linda. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 10:18:00 PM
    congrats on a great win Linda

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 9:37:00 PM
    Linda, I don't pretend to understand everything here because there is so much depth that I doubt anyone could grasp everything on first reading. "I held my own hand that very night. Telling myself it would be all right." Amazingly powerful! Deep and dark...full of pain and fear...but strength. Wow! CTB

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 8:41:00 PM
    this one is powerful and deep...yet penned to perfection, it makes the reader feel the pain...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 8:26:00 PM
    Wow.........deep, and dark is this pink poem.......who can call this pastel?........nope, it wears a color all its own !!

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 8:11:00 PM
    You aced it P>D> love & hugs xxx

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 8:51:00 AM
    Dear Linda,your poem evokes powerful imagery here. I like the feelings this gives while perusing it.

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 5:21:00 PM
    Oh I do love the way you pinned this one,,,, but is any of it true, I do hope you are healthy <3 I needed to Take A Stand, and get away from him back in the 80's, 85 to be exact xxxx;}

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 4:16:00 AM
    wonderful write

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 7:08:00 AM
    Hi PD great dark write love it, also missing your work very much, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 12:37:00 AM
    WOW!!!! I have quite a morbid streak (so I've been told) so I really loved this. I tried to do you a 'SOUP MAIL' - not sure if I did it right though....

  1. Date: 12/26/2012 12:41:00 PM
    Awesome dark ink! Absolutely loved it! -- Sean

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