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Second attempt at Tyburn..Still not easy..

Christ's Sacrifice

Unclothed
Anguished
Bloodshed
Outstretched
Was totally unclothed, anguished soul
Hands sides thorned head bloodshed, outstretched whole

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Sheol Moribund

Date: 9/27/2011 6:37:00 PM

Hi Sara: Quite a powerful poem of faith...fantastic. It reminds me of the movie "The Passion". Thanks (again) for taking the time 2 read and comment on my poem. PEACE!!!

Richard Moriarty

Date: 9/3/2011 9:18:00 AM

I wonder how many folks really give thought to that which Jesus endured for each of us, wonderful write - tremendous food for thought, thank you

Jack Horne

Date: 8/17/2011 5:03:00 PM

Powerful and moving write, my friend.

Judy Ball

Date: 8/15/2011 9:56:00 AM

Yes indeed my friend. All for us. And look at how much appreciation is shown. A good write to remind us what He did for us. God Bless, JB

Jl Sadberry

Date: 8/14/2011 5:52:00 PM

Ps. Smile, *^_#* “Thanks for Stopping By &, Have A Blessed & Beautiful Evening, My Dear!” *

Jl Sadberry

Date: 8/14/2011 5:48:00 PM

Smile, *^_^* “You Know, I Stood Within Heaven Inside of `His Majesties Beautiful Loving Arms,` Nearly Two-Thousand Years After This Moment My Dear Precious & Priceless Sara! *^_^* And His Glory Showed Myself His Indiscribable Love As, Very Few In This World Have EVER Known *^_^* Sooo, I Can Surely Attest That, `The King of The Universe,` Is Alive, Flowing With Beautiful Love & Doing, Absolutely & Perfectly, Well! *^_^* Great Poe.” === My Love to You Always, Jasper *

Jack Horne

Date: 8/14/2011 5:26:00 PM

Moving piece, Sara - and an interesting form I've never tried

Curtis White

Date: 8/14/2011 9:38:00 AM

A very descriptive write of what did happen.

Jack Ross Jr.

Date: 8/13/2011 6:29:00 PM

Awesome descriptive write of pain..and thirty lashes with the cruel Roman Throng, excellent tribute to Our Lord and Savior the Christ....with love...old Jack

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/13/2011 3:58:00 PM

a enduring hymn of devotion and praise, sara.. so apt and beautoful for this weekend and thereafter..:) hugggs, nette

Joseph Osita

Date: 8/13/2011 1:33:00 PM

Devotional write on the suffering of our lord. Sara,thanks for sharing

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/13/2011 12:54:00 PM

a vivid portrait of HIS agony and death Sara .. outstanding emotion in every line my friend.. we all should recall this sacrifice every day in our lives..luv..

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 8/13/2011 7:31:00 AM

Thank you for your wishes, jag

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/12/2011 10:08:00 PM

hmmm, I will have to check out the rules on this form. I think I see a pattern from how you did yours. Nice theme, Sara.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/12/2011 9:22:00 PM

Successfully tried Tyburn, Sara. what a a nice devotion,

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/12/2011 8:49:00 PM

I love the subject matter! Good good write!!

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 8/12/2011 8:10:00 PM

I really like this one. im not familiar w/the form but i like how it turned out - very descriptive! btw, did someone suggest you write in this form?