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Christmas Rush

Christmas Rush The sun was blood red looked like a big wound on the flank of an elephant shot by poachers. It dripped blood on white, woolly clouds which slowly turned red as the bandage on a fatally shot soldier who slowly died as his eyes turned into a mirror of the cold sky. In the town, air is torn into puffs of powder as a red ambulance comes to an abrupt halt a man on a dirty floor surrounded by presents for his family, his eyes reflects the absurdity of a Christmas decorated supermarket- his widow will be handed his gifts- As I drive home a bag of night opens and strews its soothing darkness over the land, but nearby an anguished elephant still trumpets.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/21/2012 4:33:00 PM
Lonely and sad.
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 12/22/2012 4:36:00 AM
sometimes it is good to be alone
Date: 12/21/2012 1:15:00 PM
Although very sad, I enjoyed reading this well written poem. I hope your Christmas is happier. Warm thoughts, Ralph
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 12/21/2012 1:39:00 PM
I hope so too

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