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Christmas Magis

I was in my bead and fast asleep when I heard a sound I jumped to my feet what was the noise i hear if i didnt know better I would say it sounds like reindeer What is making all of this sound Why do I see footprints on the ground Down the stairs I went Something busted open my chimney vent I grew quite alarmed Was it a robber Should I be armed I went in to take a closer look Then suddenly the whole floor shook I head a deep jolly laugh What was that sound What is this red sash I see on the ground From behind I hear a noise Its pure not scary Like the innocence of little girls and boys I tried to investigate the source Of what made this sound When I looked around though Nothing was around Then what did I see A little red present Beneath my Christmas tree As soon as it started it came to an end On the present was a note The note said " Merry Christmas my friend

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Date: 12/17/2013 10:41:00 PM
Sorry for the late warm Welcome to the soup... Hannah, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Welcome to poetry soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 12/6/2013 8:24:00 AM
lovely poem Hannah...welcome the soup...
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Date: 12/6/2013 4:05:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Hannah ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/5/2013 10:29:00 PM
I like the story, and Christmas sound, Hannah , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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