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Christened By A Summer Rain

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Christened By A Summer Rain

I spread my blanket under the trees And marvel at the fickle breeze It takes a turn, from warm to cool To soothe my brow, as I lie down I nap among the shady groves Awakened by the scent of rain One little drop, then down it pours And like a child who plays outdoors I'm christened now in nature's eyes And laugh at summer's sweet surprise
________________________________ For Francine: 5/28/13

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  1. Date: 6/1/2013 2:40:00 PM
    Hi Carrie, big congrats on your top win... I liked the last two lines.... xx

  1. Date: 5/31/2013 10:03:00 PM
    I find myself living your poems with ease too. Such a pleasant time here that unfolds at nature's pace. I wouldn't mind being there! In other words, I like your poem!

  1. Date: 5/31/2013 2:34:00 PM
    a sense of fun running through it makes it a great write Shadow/Linda

  1. Date: 5/30/2013 5:27:00 PM
    A beautiful and sweet write....I can picture the lovely scene, I love it! Big congrats! Hugs

  1. Date: 5/30/2013 4:13:00 PM
    Carrie you made your poem come to life and you pulled me into to your beautiful and carefree scene. Congratulations on your well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 5/30/2013 2:51:00 PM
    This is a lovely little piece..lighthearted. Congrats on your big win. BG

  1. Date: 5/30/2013 11:37:00 AM
    glad to be sharing the top spot with you also .... with this gem of sweet surprise......congrats

  1. Date: 5/30/2013 11:25:00 AM
    (Sigh) Well Carrie, here you go again! I just don't know what to say anymore...Oh yeah, I got something... Congratulations! (I made that up myself I swear to god I did)

  1. Date: 5/30/2013 10:02:00 AM
    I can be so in the moment you describe here right now-- we could use a bit of rain in this hot weather. I really enjoyed this, how you wrote this in a descriptive and lighthearted way-- what a beautiful moment that would be! Thank you so much for passing by my poems, such a delight to see you-- & leaving me such heartwarming comments-you are so sweet and in answer to you question: Yes!! I am nuts! Totally. I was smiling as I read what you wrote, thank you very much. Sending you warm hugs!

  1. Date: 5/30/2013 9:19:00 AM
    Big congrats on your outstanding win. AO

  1. Date: 5/30/2013 8:40:00 AM
    Congrats on your first place win in my contest Carrie. love it

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 1:18:00 PM
    Such a refreshing poem this one is Carrie!!Enjoyed a lot.

  1. Date: 5/28/2013 6:48:00 PM
    Love this one, Carrie :) That's just the way it happens too. hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 5/28/2013 4:44:00 PM
    Sweet ending, Carrie. Nice write. The very best of luck to you in the contest. :-)