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Chocolate Milkshake

A fine meal we had this evening
Somehow though it was not fufiling
My mind keeps slipping over to the Dairy Queen
Holding a frozen chocolate milkshake taste sensation

Sensual and creamy with a sweet decadence
Offered in four flavors for the exotic pallet's satisfaction
The calories hold me in pause, will power stand fast
Keys jingle hand on the door knob.....

Choco' lota ecstasy!!
Varoom varoom!!

Copyright © Doris Culverhouse

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  1. Date: 9/7/2012 8:54:00 AM
    Such a fun poem!!! I know this all too well. I LOVE chocolate!!!

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 5:00:00 PM
    the last line of this one is splendid!!

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 11:54:00 AM
    Your catchy title caught me - a real treat. Glad you have shared this.

  1. Date: 7/2/2012 3:53:00 PM
    They do make very good ones at Dairy Queen. Good write.

  1. Date: 6/29/2012 8:10:00 AM
    oh am tasting the essence of this smooth choco delight Doris.. so happy to hear from u luv.. we are heading for Ice Cream Heaven down at seashore tonight.. for a big banana split.. that will do me for the week..luv.. it will be 105 in the shade today .. but the water is so cool.. hope u are feeling fine.. your poetry rocks ..

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 9:05:00 PM
    Again i'm lovin your words, but every where thats got milkshake is shut where i am.

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 8:59:00 PM
    I love chocolate milk shakes too...enjoyed your poem Doris...thanks for stopping by...hugs...Joseph

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 8:59:00 PM
    guns might...... be fun with extreme caution, but i'm one hundred percent with you on chocolate milkshake. I owe the smile on my face to words.

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 8:51:00 PM
    Oh YEAH, Doris! Thank I'm gonna make a quick trip to the fridge right now. Oh I'm gonna make a GLORIOUS mess! Calories, shmalories, who cares? - Tim

  1. Date: 6/26/2012 7:23:00 AM
    We visited the Diary Queen yesterday after your daddy's doctor's office visit..I got a small hot fudge sundae with peanuts...It was quite delightful..Enjoyed reading your passionate write about a great treat..Mom

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 3:47:00 PM
    Doris, ooo... did you say varoom varoom... lol... now give me some chocolate... thanks for sharing your poem, always~PD

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 11:27:00 AM
    .....Yes....Choco`lota ecstasy !!!! it Doris. - Have a lovey Sunday....varoom....varoom.... - oxox me :)

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 7:15:00 AM
    I had to chuckle, your title drew me in and I think your ending has me ready to go! Love it

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 7:02:00 AM
    Awe.... Chocolate take me away!!!!!!!!!!! Awesome write!

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 7:38:00 PM
    I've been there, dear Doris! Good one. Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 7:35:00 PM
    Go for it, Doris! I would. I enjoyed your fun write. Love, Kim

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 6:55:00 PM
    you brought a smile to my face this evening Doris.. I thank you! Peace and blessings to you.