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Children Of The Immaculation


Walking through the palace courts the King, adorned in pristine jewels of love ~

Virtuous, releasing a dove into the sky that it may fly to find, their place in the sun....

Crushed unto powder and dust to be caught amid the wind these lives; truths story?!

Mixtures of both night and day; throughout the seasons mingled within the mortars

Miry pits of sin that they may know these bricks, just how frail they truly are ~ 

A windows well; piercing the darkness which permeates, to loose these chains that bind.... 

Built by the hands in love this breath; reasons, amid puddles of mud they'll rise!?

Castaway; calling from the deep unto these shadows which flee at the presence in lights

Crystallizations to cast into the wind this sin, that it may forever be buried alive ~

Walking through pristines palace courts with the King; virtuous, its place in the sun....


....“Children of The Immaculation” *

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  1. Date: 4/25/2012 8:12:00 AM
    Lovely poem children walks along with king to the place of Sun, loved always, bl

  1. Date: 4/23/2012 9:07:00 AM
    Beautiful poem, John. Thank you for your comment on my poem this morning, it made me laugh. Hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 4/23/2012 5:18:00 AM
    hi John thanks for your kind and you are precious too, take care all my love from diane xxx I always thinking of you. have a great day

  1. Date: 4/22/2012 3:29:00 PM
    Took My breath away! I'm humbled you commented on my poem!! Thank You!! C fabulae

  1. Date: 4/22/2012 1:44:00 PM
    Yes, to walk through the palace with the King is great...Enjoyed your penned thoughts..Yes, that flowered sundress would be nice..Thanks for stopping by...Sara

  1. Date: 4/22/2012 2:17:00 AM
    aw beautiful words John . How are you dear and precious brother in Jesus? xxxxxxxxxxx you will love the song face down by mat redman welcomed in to the courts of the king I have been ushered into your presece Lord i stand on merciful ground but with eevry step i tread with revrence and i'll fall face down as your Glory shiens arround.

    Date: 4/22/2012 9:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Smile ˜ More Than This My Precious Priceless Dear Diane ˜ Smile, Wrapped Inside Loving, Tender & Beautiful Arms * My Love, Forevermore, John!:) ˜