Children of the Divine Wind

Many times the ocean has saved Nippon, pearl of the sea, an oceanic symbiosis a speck in a fecund see. The dikes of man such miniscule plans to hold back the tide. The throngs, each and all crawl across the thin skin of volcanic soil or rise with in the hump-backed alps of remnant cones. Yet, the sea rises to reclaim its own scour the pallet of man, refine, burnish melt, reform. With pen and sword kanji drawn, samurai born with knife and bone entrails torn, honor tested tested by the hand of He, tested and found worthy. The children of the Divine Wind rise above the tsunami, as one, unbowed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 6/29/2011 5:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/20/2011 8:44:00 PM
glad to see this amazing one was on one of Brian's contest winner lists! a belated congrats to it.
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Date: 6/11/2011 9:03:00 AM
well done I love it
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Date: 6/11/2011 8:20:00 AM
Your poem as always, stands out among the crowd! You have the hand of nature a sword that sweeps across the land...and your own sword sweeps with flair and talent across the land of poetry!! Great work as always!! Congrats!
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Date: 6/11/2011 7:44:00 AM
congrats on your win with this great piece. cory
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Date: 6/11/2011 1:31:00 AM
soo delicate and sublime.. applause, debs! :) huggs
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Date: 5/25/2011 2:57:00 AM
I love this poem, very creative and beautiful. I can picture the scene quite clearly.
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Date: 5/14/2011 5:30:00 PM
Wow, what a very moving write this is Debbie-- beautiful tribute to this amazing people, love your title for this and if you entered your own contest, you are definitely the winner with this ;)--- btw I hope you found your mojo now?? How I hope so...:) hugs to you :)
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Date: 5/14/2011 12:29:00 AM
wow, this japanese tribute is a marvelous EXAMPLE or your own contest, Deb I really enjoyed reading this today.
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Date: 5/13/2011 8:36:00 PM
Great poem D.G., lots of given hope,..p.d.
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Date: 5/13/2011 7:47:00 PM
well u reached in very deep to create this beauty Debbie.. great parallels in your lines luv.. happy weekend...
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Date: 5/13/2011 6:32:00 PM
A wonderfully well done poem, Debbie. It has to be a high winner. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/13/2011 6:21:00 PM
I do not think there is a single thing wrong with the muse of one who wrote another stunning poem...........as divine as the wind, unbowed....you are one of few, who finds the unusual, and creates a poem. :)
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Date: 5/13/2011 3:35:00 PM
I agree with Chris, Deb. You've created a gem here. Just love the title and the images as well. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/13/2011 2:25:00 PM
As the protector has turned on its once protected, this poem's content shines!! You have captured the history and awe of the culture of a once great nation, Debbi. I am stealing your poem and hiding it in my favorites. :) This is so well-crafted! Gwendolen
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Date: 5/13/2011 5:20:00 PM
How wonderful it always feel sto be fav'ed ;)
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