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Changing Sky

Sun rise to sun rise you will lead me I'll follow you all of my days
Red sun cast a Cobalt Blue Clouds absorb this deep blue hue Clear sky-blue sky pure joy Picture perfect morn Whispy clouds fanbrushed silver Angel's wings adorn the blue Once red sun now flame orange Cast no storms for you Sponsor: Gail Angel Doyle Contest: Changing Sky Written June 25, 2013 At daybreak and sunrise First two lines not part of the poem

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Date: 7/24/2013 1:51:00 PM
SARA, love your changing sky winning poem... :-) Congratulations (-: ~SKAT~
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Date: 7/23/2013 8:15:00 PM
Well done, congrats. BG
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Date: 7/23/2013 5:05:00 PM
Sounds like summer! Very nice variations on the colour blue. Have you a great day of blue skies!
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Date: 7/23/2013 3:01:00 PM
Sara congratulation on your super win. Well deserved. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 6/25/2013 10:12:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this poem. Your words convey a very vivid picture
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Date: 6/25/2013 11:31:00 AM
So beautiful !!!! My mind has had a picture-word treat !!
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Date: 6/25/2013 10:32:00 AM
this is heavenly and soothing, sara... the lush, lyrical imagery is so captivating; enthralled am i..) huggs
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Date: 6/25/2013 7:17:00 AM
Excellent. Well imagery and described poem. Lovely. Enjoyed reading it Tfs
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Date: 6/25/2013 7:11:00 AM
Wonderful imagery in this poem Sara!Enjoyed a lot.Best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 6/25/2013 5:54:00 AM
This is a very wonderful and stupendous write my friend! I truly loved reading this tremendous poem this morning! What a lovely piece, such a markedly significant poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 6/25/2013 5:42:00 AM
how charming Sara beautifully described I love it Shadow x smiles
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