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Changing Sky

Seasons spread its wrath on delicate land,
across changing sky to deep choppy seas.
Churning up vast ocean white sand;
still ignoring man’s prayerful pleas.  

Across changing sky to deep choppy seas,
calamity strikes hard and fast. 
Still ignoring man’s prayerful pleas;
do not destroy so much we asked.

Calamity strikes hard and fast,
leaving destruction and death on its course.  
Do not destroy so much we asked;
be gentle with your force.

Leaving destruction and death on its course;
churning up vast ocean white sand.
Be gentle with your force;
seasons spread its wrath on delicate land.

Copyright © 2013 By Caryl S. Muzzey

First Place Winner ~ "Changing Sky" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Gail Angel Doyle
Aug. 21, 2013

Copyright © Caryl Muzzey

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  1. Date: 7/6/2015 4:29:00 PM
    Made me imagine mankind as a vast ocean flowing, twirling to and fro, being pushed and shoved in directions we do not know. An excellent poem, with plenty of imagination. I invite you to critique my recent poem: "The Heritage That Wrought Hate," thanks!

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 4:20:00 PM
    Congrats on your great winning work..Destruction can surely come from a sky that changes from beautiful to dark..Sara

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 1:49:00 PM
    CARYL , love your changing sky winning poem... :-) Congratulations (-: ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 5:25:00 PM
    Carol - I am clueless as to how to write a Pantoum...I am totally intimidated by it, yet you have done it with such ease, elegance and insight...Congratulations - Tim

    Ryerson Avatar Tim Ryerson
    Date: 7/23/2013 5:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    This sounds like a hurricane and that you have experienced one...Have you ? I live in Louisiana and have been through several...
  1. Date: 7/23/2013 5:07:00 PM
    Congrats on your win, enjoyed your poem xxx

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 4:43:00 PM
    Powerful poem. In more then one way! Nice form too. I like the way it interlocks. Looks challenging to write.

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 2:34:00 PM
    Caryl Mother Nature does have its wicked side. Congratulations on your well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 3:15:00 AM
    Well done and Good luck in the contest. I love this. AO

  1. Date: 6/23/2013 10:04:00 PM
    I think you have a winner here, Caryl. Thanks for your comments. Love, Joyce