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Changing Sky

Its winter, very cold chill is in the air Sky unfolds with a dark violet, purple hue The snow on the ground enforces the sky’s glare Beyond in a distant sky is a deep blue As the evening comes to play entering red An aura brought forward, like a heart that bled As the sun has left only the lamps to glow Now blackness covers the sky for all to know
Contest: Changing Sky Sponsor: Gail Angel Doyle 6/23/2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/25/2013 4:27:00 PM
Congrats on your great winning work..Sara
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Date: 7/24/2013 1:51:00 PM
RUSSELL, love your changing sky winning poem... :-) Congratulations (-: ~SKAT~
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Date: 7/23/2013 4:59:00 PM
Some of the best colours in the contest are found right here! Nice poetic way of describing it too!
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Date: 7/23/2013 2:57:00 PM
Russell what an inspiration you are. This is a fabulous read and congratulations on your super win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/1/2013 5:24:00 PM
My knowledge of the form is not even enough to offer a comment. But........I do know good poetry when I see it. ....Jake
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Date: 6/25/2013 6:18:00 AM
Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this morn..Creatively you..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 6/23/2013 1:55:00 PM
you make bleak tender with your spectacular writem russell.. a sensitive work of art!.. grreat stuff!... thanks for the honor of being part of your last contest. :) huggs
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