Changing Sky

Rain, now just light sprinkles Sunbeam on the kitchen floor I see beyond the apple trees An arch of color not there before A rainbow's vivid hues appeared As began an aching in my breast It's splendor there for moments With this the earth was blessed Rainbows that we see are visions A drop of water in the prism skies They fade into our imaginations Seen with more than just our eyes
6/22/13
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 8/1/2013 5:18:00 PM
Beautiful work. I can see and feel every emotion. It took me out of time. Kilmer
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Date: 7/25/2013 4:18:00 PM
Great winning work..Enjoyed reading today..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 7/25/2013 2:19:00 PM
Barbara.... congrats *****SKAT
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Date: 7/25/2013 1:44:00 PM
The last line fills the heart of your poem! Lovely !!! Congratulations on your well deserved win. :)
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Date: 7/24/2013 1:48:00 PM
Barbara, love your changing sky winning poem... :-) Congratulations (-: ~SKAT~
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Date: 7/23/2013 4:40:00 PM
Excellent poem. I congratulate you on your win! I like your thoughts on rainbows; deeper than the colours and beauty. Beautiful pictures too.
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Date: 7/23/2013 3:21:00 PM
Congrats Barbara on your win. Such a wonderful moment in a day.
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Date: 7/23/2013 2:30:00 PM
Barb I can see why your quatrain placed as a win. An outstanding write my friend. Congratulations. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 6/27/2013 7:12:00 PM
We have seen those heavenly prisms fall from the skies every night this week. A lot of thunder and lightning come along for the ride. Good write.
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Date: 6/25/2013 12:16:00 PM
Ahhhh...this is so beautiful BG!Love the imagery.
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Date: 6/22/2013 8:04:00 PM
BG...rainbows do connect with our souls....well done! A beautiful "in the moment" artwork!
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Date: 6/22/2013 6:06:00 PM
most enjoyable gl in contest Shadow x smiles
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