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Changing Skies

On waking the child runs to the window will it still be there she is thinking? there in the sky replacing the sun is an orb so fantastical that reflects Prisms of colour are flooding out the sky changing as the orb like a disco ball shatters distorting and reflecting Sometimes a polka dot then some stripes wavy lines of colour triangles tumbling The child stared in wonder if she lived to a hundred she would never forget the day of the changing skies contest: changing skies written 06/22/2013

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Date: 7/17/2013 11:04:00 PM
Lovely piece my dear.
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Date: 7/18/2013 12:01:00 PM
dear M.M Ty so much love Shadow xox smiles
Date: 6/25/2013 11:53:00 PM
beautiful.....:):):):)Adarsh
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Date: 6/26/2013 8:16:00 AM
Ty Adarsh for your time reading my work Shadow x smiles
Date: 6/21/2013 11:23:00 PM
Lovely write Shadow ... Seren
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Date: 6/21/2013 11:21:00 PM
Excellent. Well pened. Enjoyed. Tfs
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