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Changing Moods

Yesterday showers fell upon a gentle face today they enter the world of a different pace, when one you take on a roller coaster ride on to heaven then deep in despair nowhere to hide, as darkness descends upon each avenue eyes adjust as guiding lamps of one’s sinew, before the mind searches vigorously for reasons and veils of your face I see like the changing seasons. Some days one of down hearted total dejection some days an offer of heaven's welcoming crutch, some days with in the abyss I fall into infection some days from out of the darkness your hand i touch! © Harry J Horsman 2013

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Date: 1/18/2020 2:51:00 PM
Harry congratulations on your win!;)
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Date: 1/16/2013 9:57:00 PM
Hello Harry, a deep poem,,, i feel your moods changing and this poem came with reason... always... yours...PD
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Date: 1/10/2013 4:10:00 AM
yowser Harry very romantic indeed, I like a lot...David
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Date: 1/10/2013 3:10:00 AM
I change moods at least five times a day. Great poem!
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Date: 1/9/2013 11:05:00 PM
Harry, I'm glad I remembered to come and find one of your poems before going off tonight. Wow, I just loved how you ended this one. Falling into an abyss and then contrasted with touching the hand of a loved one in the darkness. A great finishing touch.
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Date: 1/9/2013 8:23:00 PM
Hi Harry, really liked this rhyme a lot, outstanding work. Rollo
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Date: 1/9/2013 6:03:00 PM
some days these changing moods confirm we are still breathing, I love this Harry. Sorry for my silence. Happy 2013 to you my friend ;) lovehugs Wilma
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Date: 1/9/2013 4:47:00 PM
Dear Harry, my name is Kenny Potter, I am a former student of Chef's whom you know as Harry or HG. I don't know if you read his last blog(I wrote) I am asking his Family: Poetry Soup to soup mail him, asking him to use his portable oxygen tank at least 8 hours a day. His quote to me "I am not walking around with tubes up my nose and a mask on my face" If enough of his Family request this He can live at his cabin (HOME) Family is very big to Chef Respectfully Yours Kenny A Fledgling Poet
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Date: 1/9/2013 3:24:00 PM
Your last line is so supreme and totally awesome...it needs no introduction...just as it is it's so very powerful! I truly loved reading this delightful and amazing poem this afternoon! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 1/9/2013 3:22:00 PM
You've described perfectly the "roller coaster" ride we're on Harry; and you did it amazingly well! Love, annalise
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Date: 1/9/2013 2:17:00 PM
Oh Harry this is so lovely , wow we all have moods but to be lifted like this with a hand to grasp in our despair... lovely xx
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Date: 1/9/2013 12:20:00 PM
Harry; I like this. we all have changing moods. I'm having one now. It is storming here where I live. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 1/9/2013 12:15:00 PM
Harry, 'downhearted' is one of my favorite words... the last line of hope--well done
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Date: 1/9/2013 11:37:00 AM
Beautiful! This is so lovely, I enjoyed reading it. I always love reading poetry because it has so much meaning. Very good write Harry.
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Date: 1/9/2013 10:45:00 AM
Just a lovely write! You are a good friend to have Harry. Light & Love
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