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"changing Minds"

If we can close our eyes and switch our minds... I'd see your ways and your dreams inside... You could see my world through my mirrored sight... And know how I feel and come in my light...

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/25/2010 6:58:00 PM

And u could use either of these couplets to enter Constance's Crystalline mini blog contest.. awesome words my friend... lovely sentiments..

Vicki Acquah

Date: 9/25/2010 5:21:00 AM

This I LOVE s s.t. t .p good write! when I say that next u will know it means Short Sweet & To the POINT. very nice really!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/24/2010 7:50:00 PM

This is very nice, Michael. Keep those little poems coming! Luv, Andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/24/2010 2:41:00 PM

You've got this one right...Enjoyed reading your insight..Sara

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/24/2010 1:03:00 PM

well written poem on human relationships. great thouhts.

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/24/2010 11:10:00 AM

If only Michael, I wishfulness of your write.. Had a nice relazing day.. thank goodness for PH :) love Wilma

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/24/2010 10:21:00 AM

That sure would be nice, to just be able to switch minds, would definitely solve the problem of misunderstandings and avoid confusion! Really like that thought! --thank you so much for dropping by my poems :) --nikko :)

Jo Bien

Date: 9/24/2010 9:36:00 AM

Michael.. I borrowed some of your first line in Pandora's box...I hope you don't mind :-)

Date: 9/24/2010 8:59:00 AM

Very nice poem. I enjoyed reading. Love Scarlett

Jo Bien

Date: 9/24/2010 8:00:00 AM

this is beautiful Michael! J.B.