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Voluptuous fall frozen in its descending; free flowing by spring. For Raul Moreno's "Icy Cascade" contest

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/30/2013 11:44:00 AM

Susan, ... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Have fun and take care during the new seasons Holidays.. Always <3 =LINDA

Daver Austin

Date: 11/27/2013 5:57:00 AM

I like the movement in this one. Congrats on the selection. daver

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/7/2010 12:12:00 PM

Congratulations Sue, on your placement in Raul’s “Icy Cascade” haiku contest. I can see why you are in the winners’ circle! Nice! Smiles, Dane Ann

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/4/2010 1:50:00 PM

oops, sorry I said hm, I just saw that he gave 15 places in this one!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/4/2010 1:48:00 PM

HI, Susan and Congratulations on your HM. LUv, Andrea ps that was very original "voluptuous fall"

John Freeman

Date: 3/4/2010 10:00:00 AM

A nice place Sue. Congratulations, Agape, Moses

Marty Owens

Date: 3/4/2010 7:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your win...enjoyed..Marty

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 3/3/2010 9:48:00 PM

So very nice Haiku! Congrats on your win! Best wishes, Caroline.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/3/2010 5:22:00 PM

Hey there you are Sue! haven't seen you in a while. Congratulations on yoiur win with this voluptuous Haiku! Cool!

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/3/2010 12:31:00 PM

My warm congratulations to you, Sue, on this wonderful Haiku taking a winning spot in the contest! Enjoy!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/3/2010 12:25:00 PM

Sue, Congratulations on being honored in the winner's circle with this lovely haiku. blessings, Connie

James Fraser

Date: 3/3/2010 11:34:00 AM

Sue, many congratulations on your placing in Raul's contest >> James

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/3/2010 8:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Lovely words. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/3/2010 5:45:00 AM

Congrats Sue on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. a marvelous Haiku of description for the photo... enjoy this wonderful win... and thankxxx so very much for your special comments on my poetry and blog.. appreciate..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/3/2010 3:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Icy Cascade Sue. Love,Carol

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/3/2010 1:45:00 AM

Sue, congratulations on your placement in my contest...Raul

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 2/28/2010 2:48:00 PM

Dear Sue, the picture is beautifully expressed in this traditional 5/7/5 syllables haiku. Good luck in the contest. Love, Iolanda

Daver Austin

Date: 2/28/2010 5:48:00 AM

A drop into the well, or a warming swim. I like it. Love, daver

Sean Kelly

Date: 2/28/2010 3:31:00 AM

You got the picture in words , Sue and best of luck in the contest ....

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/27/2010 7:54:00 PM

A wonderful description of the photo, Sue! Each season ushers in its own beauty. If an when spring ever arrives, the poets here will be writing about flowers again. Soup Mail returned! Love, Carolyn

Marty Owens

Date: 2/27/2010 7:52:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku...enjoyed....good luck in the contest...Marty