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Consonants and vowels are coming one by one, rules are rules and we are following all those only poetry is suffering a bit I think although this is sure a challenge and poets are quite eager to accept this, as challenge is life everybody knows and meeting it brings a satisfaction, only keep in mind one thing unshackle poetry and free it like a bird, our poeticity is beyond any rules, imagination never obey laws or rules.... although my immediate target is finding a word of vowel and bid adieu! © kash poet (kashinath karmakar) ============================================== Placement: 3rd; (March 2013) Contest: CON/VOW Sponsor:David Williams RULES:1 original poem 13 lines no more or less, with a 2 word title, the first word of your poem must start with a consonant, next word a vowel, and so-on, consonant then vowel so your first word is a consonant and the last word a vowel, same with your title, consonant then vowel. A minimum of 6 words per line.

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Date: 3/16/2013 8:46:00 AM
Good luck with the contest, Kash. Enjoyed this.
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Date: 3/16/2013 8:46:00 AM
Whoopsiee, u won already!! Congratss
Date: 3/3/2013 10:48:00 AM
Great take on this challenging contest! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 3/3/2013 9:16:00 AM
Kash, congratulations with your awesome win..xox~PD
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Date: 3/3/2013 7:14:00 AM
great write and win Kash...congrats
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Date: 3/2/2013 10:26:00 PM
Lol. Well done Kash!! Big Congratulations on your win!! Big huggsss!!! Deb
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Date: 3/2/2013 9:27:00 PM
Congratulations....kash
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Date: 3/2/2013 3:00:00 PM
Kash, yours is the funnest one to read. Congrats to you. what an achievement for you to place big in this kind of contest. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 3/2/2013 11:21:00 AM
Ahhh chafing at the bit..we all do from time to time. Congrad's on your winning write. Light & Love
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Date: 3/2/2013 10:06:00 AM
Kash, Congratulations on your placement in my contest, I wondered who's this one was as I had to check every poem for the correct sequence and this kept stopping me in my tracks as the word vowel starts with a consonant....loved the poem though, well done...David
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Date: 3/1/2013 12:46:00 PM
Hey, Kash, I am here quickly just seeing my comments and then going to see a movie called Snitch. Do you know what Snitch means? You can look it up. heeehee. bye now, Andrea
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Date: 2/28/2013 9:05:00 AM
Unlike myself........you never seem to need anyone to help you make it perfect! You have once again, gracefully accepted the challenge, and met it head on .... with perfect balance of poetry and perfection!
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Date: 2/27/2013 7:55:00 PM
gosh, I studied it and read it carefully. I just can't find anything wrong, Kash, so I sure hope it passed his test. It is VERY good. Considering english not your native language, it is one of the better ones I have seen. Awesome job, Kash and I really love the message of it!!
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Date: 2/27/2013 1:34:00 PM
Intricate, well done... Terry
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Date: 2/27/2013 7:29:00 AM
You did very well with this difficult form! However I do believe the last word has to start with a vowel, not the word vowel! Just thought I'd help you out there Kashi! This is an incredible poem, I loved how you approached the piece, such Brilliant Work!!
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Date: 2/27/2013 7:15:00 AM
That wasnt easy i know..but you did a grest job lkash
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