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Chained

A soul so chained it dragged the weight Through the graveyard to the vast estate Into a life money bound Pretensious living their great crown Money their god and baptism Soul chained by materialism No longer life of the party Caught between life and death..bungee Chained soul needs an exorcism To free from consumerism possibly unfinished

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/25/2012 11:11:00 AM
Perfect timing for Halloween, it is scarey how consumerism has such a scarey effect on us humans. Well said. In answer to your question on my poem "Window Pain" I am speaking from an earlier time. I am thankfuly blessed beyond what I ever could have imagined. Thanks for inquiring.
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Date: 10/23/2012 9:26:00 AM
wow!! what a poem. I liked it lots. It must be mt dark side coming out. Jancarl
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Date: 10/23/2012 8:58:00 AM
wow Sara, this is serious stuff, to my fav, this is truly political, and words of sheer honesty, echo across the page...
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Date: 10/22/2012 4:07:00 PM
Wow, this is an incredibly deep one my friend! I really enjoyed reading this fantastic and outstanding poem this afternoon! What a 'heads up' piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 10/22/2012 3:53:00 PM
Hi Sara, I do not like some feeling some souls ave to carry around. I think this soul can use an exorcism... well done on your couplets... xox..pd
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