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Celestial Affair

Take off your veil o beauty,
  your moles can't hide your sorrows and nudity,
    is the longing causing quiet and peace?,
      you will arrive again and him will seek,
        loaded with stones and shaded with shades,
         like a beautiful bride smiling in escapade,
          decorated with black and a flirtatious tiara,
            seduce your lovers and take them to euphoria,
              celebrate your wait before he arrives,
                elevate our senses and your lover deprived,
                 following him daily is your ritual,
                  fortunate our advantage he ain't so punctual,
                   you wait patiently with your tiara and stones,
                    maintain utmost calm in stubborn bones,
                     make no movement, make no sigh, wait for him and you hope high,
                      hours have passed and centuries gone,
                       your undying love and longing never groans,
He appears finally... smitten by your charms, wishes to grab a chance in your game of trance,
  smiling wide and filled with power he squishes your moles, feeling like a tower,
    you don't smile... you don't cry...rather shy away and think not fine,
      to let him feel... so long denied,
         with red cheeks and crimson smile at him nonchalantly,
           he comes in your way and questions you gallantly, no reply, you don't try 
              to forgive and long declined,
                 angered and suffered he aims high and breaks your tiara so crystalline,
                   slip away o beauty! 
                      Shadows define your presence in his agony,
                        slip away o beauty! 
                           To arrive again in your stones and nudity......  

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  1. Date: 8/31/2010 12:46:00 PM
    I love how you decided to write your poem as well as it sounding like a good old fashioned epic type poem. Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 8/27/2010 12:18:00 PM
    I give you a top mark for two reasons. You shft the words with seamless craft and your passion flows controlled, just barely, but never into ranting or self parody, which is not easy to do-in effect, walking a tighrope. Here, you suceeded. Keep this. Best wishes to you, Gerard

  1. Date: 8/25/2010 11:18:00 AM
    Congratulations Rinki on your win in Nikko Palmario's contest "Holy Mole-y". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/23/2010 7:29:00 AM
    congrats on your win with this lovely poem

  1. Date: 8/22/2010 7:10:00 PM
    Very expressive, rinki, Congratulations! LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 8/22/2010 2:09:00 PM
    Congrats RAJ on your winning poem in Nikko's contest... awesome as usual.. enjoyed on my wedding day..luv...ciao..

  1. Date: 8/22/2010 5:38:00 AM
    Great poem, Rinki. Congratulations on your win! Carolyn

  1. Date: 8/22/2010 4:56:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Nikko's contest Rinki, enjoy your day :) Wilma

  1. Date: 8/22/2010 4:49:00 AM
    Hi Rinki -- I just found this so beautiful yet also haunting in its own way and I just had to consider it even if it wasn't listed as rhyme-- I think the format was also captivating-- what a story you've woven here! Congratulations for being among my winners :) -- nikko :)

  1. Date: 8/22/2010 3:53:00 AM
    Many congratulations rinki on your win in Nikko's contest with this fine witty poem >> James

  1. Date: 8/11/2010 8:02:00 PM
    I would enter it if it were me .. it may be something NIKKO is looking for in her contest and if u win wonderful..if u don't no harm done..keep trying as contests are the way to get read and noticed ..sponsors remember poems that hit them just right.. keep trying my friend.. with luv..

  1. Date: 8/11/2010 3:41:00 PM
    WoW.. this is awesome.. don't know if u could call it rhyme butif u could u could enter it in the Holy Mole-y contest posted..luv..