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Cause and Affect

why do they let me bleed help is what I need i'm trapped in this darkness I cut myself and feel the sharpness why dont I feel loved why dont I push when i'm shoved why am I shy i'm alone when I cry why do I not fear suicide i'm sad and alone on the inside i'm trapped in the quick sand no one will lend a hand you cant sink my boat it was never afloat why do they try to hurt me i'm already alone and tiny as a flea why dont I trust any adult I dont know but it involves assault

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Date: 8/8/2011 10:33:00 AM
excellent write, deep thoughts, good poetry. i would edit it to remove the spelling mistakes.
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Harley Green
Date: 8/8/2011 10:40:00 AM
what did i spell wrong? and how do u spell them right?

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