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when i think of you my mind wonders to a place where there is no time the air is soft and the sun is warm and peace surrounds me twisted in love joy and compassion leaving me breathless standing steel in a timeless fashion never wanting for this moment to end just to realize that we can only be friends

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Date: 12/18/2010 3:53:00 AM
Good one filled with emotion...I can feel the scene...I am glad that I stopped by this one this morning..Welcome to soup may your stay be long with many more post like this one..Your presence at my work lifted my spirits..Sara
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Date: 12/15/2010 7:29:00 PM
i feel this piece my friend excellent words my friend
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Date: 12/15/2010 6:42:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your heart with us through your poetry here at PoetrySoup Tracy. My time for reading and commenting will be short until after the New Year. So, today I send a wish from my house to yours. Have a Joyous Holiday and a Happy New Year. Please remember the sick and hungry in your prayers daily. Do all you can to help in anyway you can. Love and blessing, Carol and Family (Your smile can warm a heart)
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Date: 12/14/2010 10:54:00 PM
THANKS KRISSY I TRY MY BEST TO PUT MY FEELING INTO WORD
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Date: 12/14/2010 6:24:00 PM
Oh my...nicely done! This really resonates with me!!
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