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caught up

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caught up

when i think of you 
my mind wonders
to a place where there is no time
the air is soft
and the sun is warm
and peace surrounds me
twisted in love joy and compassion
leaving me breathless standing steel
in a timeless fashion 
never wanting for this moment to
end just to realize that 
we can only be friends

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  1. Date: 12/18/2010 3:53:00 AM
    Good one filled with emotion...I can feel the scene...I am glad that I stopped by this one this morning..Welcome to soup may your stay be long with many more post like this one..Your presence at my work lifted my spirits..Sara

  1. Date: 12/15/2010 7:29:00 PM
    i feel this piece my friend excellent words my friend

  1. Date: 12/15/2010 6:42:00 AM
    Thank you for sharing your heart with us through your poetry here at PoetrySoup Tracy. My time for reading and commenting will be short until after the New Year. So, today I send a wish from my house to yours. Have a Joyous Holiday and a Happy New Year. Please remember the sick and hungry in your prayers daily. Do all you can to help in anyway you can. Love and blessing, Carol and Family (Your smile can warm a heart)

  1. Date: 12/14/2010 10:54:00 PM

  1. Date: 12/14/2010 6:24:00 PM
    Oh my...nicely done! This really resonates with me!!