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Caught in the Sun

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Caught in the Sun

I feel his heart race
His warm breath rustling my hair
My mind tells me, ‘run’! 
Then lips find mine, so supple!
Too late! We're caught in the sun!

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  1. Date: 3/20/2013 6:45:00 AM
    nice image

  1. Date: 12/30/2012 8:10:00 AM
    That sun must be so nice and warm. Enjoyed, Happy New Year. Love, daver

  1. Date: 12/29/2012 3:00:00 PM
    this is amazing, Annalise, have a happy New Year...

  1. Date: 12/29/2012 8:34:00 AM
    I like it! Annalise! Jimbo

  1. Date: 12/28/2012 8:33:00 AM
    *.* Stepping from the train as arriving unto a new town and gazing quietly about. Hello, beautiful Annalise. This is a very wonderful poem in pictures of love. 'Caught in the sun;' I love that line. No other place that I would ather be and also, your lovely heart's visit was quite nice and I appreciate its warmth very much. Beautiful painting fom a beautiful girl! Have a blessed as glorious day and happy holidays. Love always, Jasper *.*

  1. Date: 12/28/2012 12:01:00 AM
    an intense visual .. very dramatic Annalise and good luck luv .. thankxx for kind words and prayers during my health ordeal .. means so much .. wishes for a blessed NY

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 10:57:00 PM
    The sun gives life. Just watch out that you don't get overexposed. You wouldn't want to get burned. Enjoyed your poem with its nuances.

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 10:16:00 PM
    Great poem. Cute! Hope you had a wonderful Christmas, Annalise. Wishing you an incredible, full of excitement New year!! Love ya, Toquyen

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 7:50:00 PM
    so sensual and lovely too Annalise! Love,Deb

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 6:53:00 PM
    Good twist at the end here!Lovely tanka Annalise.

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 5:16:00 PM
    So romantic..Enjoyed reading your passionate work..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are always so uplifting..Sara

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 4:35:00 PM
    that's a very lovely Tanka poem with an romantic touch,Thanks for sharing it.God bless you.Hugs!Erich Happy New Year!