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Casualty of Loss

Casualty of Loss Drifting in murky waters shadows lengthening with sorrow’s darkness blight. Cobwebbed remembrances take flight, taking with it prism’s life-light Shades of gloom mist yonder shores obscuring vision, while leeching into the life source stagnating the living waters. Cruel fate laps brutally against the sands of time while memories smother and are swept away on death borne callus waves Lifeboat sinking with life’s bleedings along shadowed shores.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/23/2012 3:16:00 PM
Deep with sadness Debra, we seem tohave more than our share of it in life. Wish the memories didn't linger so persistently. Keepyour chin up luv. Lizzie :)
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Date: 8/22/2012 11:41:00 AM
very creative with words and good visualisation thakyou for coments on mine x david scott
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Date: 8/13/2012 2:58:00 PM
Thank you for your wonderful comments on my poems. They mean the world. It seems there have been a few on soup who have been visited by the blues fairy lately. May God strip her of her wings. Take Care Debra, your friend Bob.
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Date: 8/13/2012 2:54:00 PM
Hello Friend. I see your in the midst of carrying on. I can not say just what it is that makes it all worth while. But with your help reciprocated, we'll do it up in style. Keep your life vest on. :)
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Robert Johnson
Date: 8/13/2012 2:55:00 PM
Date: 8/13/2012 12:37:00 PM
great write with serious thoughts Debra
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Date: 8/13/2012 12:35:00 PM
touching me no end, debra... your first lines set the mood for the rest of the poem.. much enjoyed.. hope you are feeling better now..:) with huggs! :)
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Date: 8/13/2012 10:28:00 AM
Debra I like the metaphors in this...David
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Debra Squyres
Date: 8/13/2012 11:47:00 AM
Thank you, I wrote this as the reverse side of one I wrote called Crystal Waters. I'll have to post it also. I call the two, Picture poems, as I was inspired to write both from a picture called, Crystal Waters, by Josephin Wall...a very moving painting.
Date: 8/13/2012 10:21:00 AM
A very moving poem Debra, but beautiful written. - Well done - Have a lovely new week. - oxox love Anne-Lise <3
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Debra Squyres
Date: 8/13/2012 11:45:00 AM
Thank you.

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