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Carousels and Candyfloss

“CAROUSELS AND CANDYFLOSS’ Childhood memories cherished and remote recollections Emerging in magnified clarity encourage renewed perceptions Open air big screen films referred to as “Drive-Ins” A regular Saturday night treat -- family car, excitement within After eating our packed picnic snack Permission asked to play—promises to come back Our greatest thrill sat under the huge white screen Amusement ride—galloping flying horses-- enchanting scene Carousel rotating- fairground organ—a musical ride Merry-go-round- gilded Horse ballet dancing with pride Some high on poles, interspersed benches— These were placed for the less adventurous Waiting patiently the ride slows down Small minds choosing horses to call their own Rushing to mount our fantasy up high Small feet in stirrups, as wooden horses fly The candy-floss man stands on the side Inflated packets-- pale pink, blue and white divide Cotton- wool sugary treats entice as we wait Melt in the mouth moments to keep us awake Kim van Breda—February 2013

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Date: 6/7/2013 11:51:00 PM
Hi Kim your poem is on a parallel with mine. you know what they say, ''Great minds think alike" it is very interesesting as mine is also, my poem dates back to the 1950's in England and yours a later version, both are great poems and will draw attention to other poets. thank you for following my poems. all the best. John Ginesi
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Date: 4/12/2013 3:36:00 AM
Hey, I used to sell cotton candy at a baseball stadium! They called me the Candy Man, haha. I liked your descriptions... it felt like I was there, eating sugary floss, surrounded by music.
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Date: 2/26/2013 12:06:00 PM
of cotton candy,,, mmm
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Date: 2/26/2013 12:05:00 PM
a nice childhood memory Kim, but, somehow this is not a memory for me. I love the imagery and sugary feeling here. There is a circus going on 20 minutes away from my town. and here in my town we just re-lived the once a year stock show memory, we had a carnival 2 weeks or so ago. and boy did I get my hands on the pale pink, and blue divine sweet. my kids don't have the patients you display above... however we all enjoyed the melt in our mouth sweet moments... always~ LINDA
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Kim Van Breda
Date: 2/26/2013 12:10:00 PM
Thank you.. this poem I think.. may be specifically targeted towards S/African memories in childhood experiences. Not really a carnival... just a 'drive-inn' open air movie and one ride common to all such venues. P.S. Your comments are invaluable and encouraging. xxx
Date: 2/23/2013 10:31:00 AM
I could smell the popcorn!
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Date: 2/23/2013 2:50:00 AM
- Pleasant childhood memories, a lovely poem Kim. - Have a wonderful weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/22/2013 3:42:00 PM
What great memories you have recalled here, Kim!...Drive-In movies and carnivals...nothing better and that's for sure...I used to like to ride the double Ferris Wheel at the State Fair...What a view! (although I was always petrified with fear) - Tim
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