Carefree and Simple

CAREFREE AND SIMPLE

my daily fancy
i’d love to live on a farm
in hilly country
mountain peaks in the distance
the animals all carefree

then a further thought
we’d have a good fishing pond
oh, not a huge lake
just large enough to boat, swim,
and ice skate in the winter

central to the spread
this cozy, two-story house
with a sitting porch
white picket fence surrounding
and willows, elm, and maple

barn all painted red
ladder-climb to the hayloft
horses in their stalls
one big upper story door
for sitting on moonlit nights

neighbors not too far
but scattered among the hills
with a steeple church
modern, not gothic or weird
but emblem of good feeling

and these final thoughts –
a big Saturday night dance
in the county hall
smart looking gal on my arm
just hear those hoe-down fiddles!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 6/8/2013 11:00:00 PM
oh for times like these. You make it sound so idyllic, Daver. I really like this plain and simple and cute poem. (so funny what you said about my young man who cuts off fingers!!)
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Date: 6/5/2013 6:35:00 AM
Dear Dave - Shades of "Tammy Tell Me True." Fiddle me timbers. love, Kathy P.S. - to say your dream is heaven.
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Date: 5/29/2013 12:45:00 PM
Dear Daver, this poem took me on such a lovely journey back to a simpler life and time. Don't catch any fish without me! I'll tackle them if I have to. LOL I didn't write any new poetry. Soup admin just chose an old one to put in their featured poems. Thanks for reading it though. Love and blessings, Carolyn
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Date: 5/28/2013 4:14:00 PM
Very descriptive work..Reads like it would be a wonderful place to live..Enjoyed reading this evening..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 5/27/2013 7:06:00 PM
remarks of couples soon after ww2. i want that too. idyllic!! nice write. randy
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Date: 5/27/2013 9:34:00 AM
Dang that P D..she done beat to the comment.. L O L))) anyways Daver I'd like the whereabouts of this lil spread...' puts me in a relaxed frame of mind..so that danc'n would limber me up; then i would be ready for breakfast...'
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Date: 5/27/2013 9:26:00 AM
Daver, a carefree feeling... nothing better than the white picket fence, day by day... i like the simple moonlight nights... nice poem. take care ~PD
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