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Career Move

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Career Move

No wonder I'm snaggin'
Jumping your bar
I've hitched my broke waggin'
To the wrong star...

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  1. Date: 8/2/2013 5:50:00 PM
    I thought I would read where it all started Tim. I enjoyed this little wagon poem.

  1. Date: 5/7/2010 8:42:00 AM
    funny and sad! Starting way at the back. I can't recall your poems I have read already. Best to begin back here! Luv, andrea

  1. Date: 2/19/2010 5:05:00 PM
    a sad tail ;) Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/16/2010 9:19:00 AM
    Today I am taking the time to enjoy myself reading some of my favorite poems. Your poem, Career Move is one of my favorites. Thanks for writing it. I enjoyed reading it, again. Lovingly, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 9/13/2009 2:35:00 AM
    Nice work Tim, I see the Iambic Pentameter meter in the's hard to see 'cause the lines are broken in half. Overall it's a great poem...Raul

  1. Date: 8/28/2009 11:26:00 AM
    you know half the time I can't "hear" the stressed syllable & the other half I can make any slyable stressed...and the 3rd half LOL I can't seem to count feet????? No wonder I'm snaggin...if ' is a stress...-(no) '(won) -(der) ' (I'm) - (snag) '(in)...I think that's 3 feet???? not 5 and I'm not sure if it's stressed as above? or 'no,'won,-der??? H E L P LOL Liked the verse anyway!

  1. Date: 8/22/2009 7:43:00 AM
    This is a wonderful, awesome piece; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke

  1. Date: 8/21/2009 6:24:00 PM
    Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on having your poem featured to my other comment. This is an enjoyable piece with a bit of humor. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 8/20/2009 5:23:00 PM
    Congratulations on being featured this week!! Good job, Tim! Ruben.

  1. Date: 8/19/2009 11:15:00 PM
    I love this.JB

  1. Date: 8/19/2009 4:56:00 AM
    congratulations on your featured poem, God bless you from diane

  1. Date: 8/18/2009 12:27:00 PM
    Congratulations on being featured>>James

  1. Date: 8/18/2009 11:02:00 AM
    Tim, I'm going to favorite this one. It is relevant and well spoken. Excellent write. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Lovingly, Dane

  1. Date: 8/17/2009 10:23:00 AM
    HA! Love it ! Congrats on your featured work. Its that revelation where you want to smack yourself on the head! Well done....

  1. Date: 8/17/2009 6:36:00 AM
    Congrats on being featured. Good write! JB

  1. Date: 8/17/2009 4:50:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Tim. Love Carol

  1. Date: 7/26/2009 2:56:00 PM
    Nice and funny Iambic Pentameter. Sara

  1. Date: 7/26/2009 12:34:00 PM
    So much said with an interesting perspective in just four lines. The rhyme works well. I enjoyed it. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen