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Can'T Go Onthis Way

6-20-2012 I can't go on this way Just the edge of the beginning,I began to see, What was being said,was not what we had, Like a blue nose on a red faced clown,it's not the same, No matter how hard you try to explain, Kinda hard to be free when inside a cage,to keep in mind, I hardly knew you, your actions ruled over me, Until I broke away,now I live in the moon.

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Date: 6/27/2012 7:58:00 AM
run or should I say fly to the moon Ricky,get away,that relationship sounds like a one way ticket,lol,great write
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Date: 6/26/2012 2:34:00 PM
Very strong person that was bound..Reminds me of Jackie Gleason's saying to Alice about he was going to send her to the moon..Sara
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Date: 6/20/2012 12:39:00 PM
Yippie ....if thas how you spell it anyway...cause brotha...you on yo way. Peace and blessing my friend..
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Ricky Brown
Date: 6/20/2012 1:05:00 PM
Thanks Man.

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