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Can't Be Friends

Before, while, and after I said goodbye
I couldn't help but sit there and cry.
I cried on and off for 7 hours and slept one
Woke up and cried again, I still wasn't even done.

Two more hours…wake up again.
Every so often a tear falls in the open.
I literally feel an aching pain in my chest
Thinking of how I lost you, wanting to forget.

I'm feeling sick and I still haven't ate.
I want you…my thoughts aren't straight.
Mane, almost every about you
And almost every thought…is about who?

Someone who could have been playing me
Or showing me where my desires could lead.
I wanted to tell you everything, I wanted to say more,
There wasn't enough time and now my broken heart's feeling so sore.

I just wanna be alone and listen to this depressing song,
I can't get you out of my head... it hurts. Is that wrong?
I understand that I may be foolish wasting my time hurting over you.
But in all honesty my dear, I really wanted us to be something too. 

Copyright © Angel C

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  1. Date: 1/30/2014 8:41:00 AM
    Great write, the feeling of loneliness deeply expressed in this piece. Amazing honesty. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 3:49:00 PM
    good write angel time heals and i felt the hurt in this tina :)

    C Avatar Angel C
    Date: 9/20/2013 5:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you ma'am ?
  1. Date: 8/30/2013 2:44:00 PM
    Hi Angel, A heartfelt write about love lost.. Ken

    C Avatar Angel C
    Date: 9/2/2013 1:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Ken.