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Cane of Cain

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Cane of Cain

The cane of Cain
So far away from sugar cane
It only shows the sting of pain   
Just like a pin in the ring of crane                
When rain cease to reign                   
Pain only uses the cane we give to it
On the giver or on others                 
It does that at times with fever like a river          
And it could be forever   
On-till you say it's over and say stop           
Pain keeps hopping 
while we keep hoping and hurting              
You just have to set the time.

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  1. Date: 7/5/2012 3:52:00 PM
    His timing indeed...a difficult measure...wonderful write Fisayo!! big hugss, love ya, deb

    Aderounmu Avatar Fisayo Aderounmu
    Date: 5/16/2013 10:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank Deb, luv ya.
  1. Date: 7/5/2012 5:55:00 AM
    I like this poem it makes us take a good look at pain and what it accomplishes and how we can change our perception on it, these are words I needed to hear, thank you for sharing this, Fisayo, hugs vie

    Aderounmu Avatar Fisayo Aderounmu
    Date: 7/5/2012 9:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Vie, thanks for a visit to my pot of PoetrySoup and taking a bite from my 'meat'. Shallom.