Campfire

Campfire Marshmallows roast Vanilla scent Floats, punctuating joy Oh! gilded starry night Memories

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Bl Devnath

Date: 11/9/2012 8:08:00 AM

Memories of sweet past. Lovely done and loved always with thanks for stopping by on my write, my friend, bl

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/7/2012 5:42:00 AM

scintillating me, sara.. seems like a vignette; we need 2 stanzas... :) how is karter?..huggs!

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 11/6/2012 8:23:00 PM

This is very nice. I guess a campfire will always bring nice memories. Thanks for sharinf. Lucilla

Ilene Bauer

Date: 11/6/2012 5:03:00 PM

i can just taste those roasted marshmallows! very nice!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/6/2012 3:03:00 PM

what a joyful tanka this is, on those old camping memories. very nice, sara.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/6/2012 12:09:00 PM

This is lovely Sara, its been years since I went camping, quite fancy it again now xx

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 11/6/2012 11:42:00 AM

Lovely write, Sara. A feel good poem! Congrats on the good news! I DID keep you in my prayers. Glad to hear that your ticker was clear! xox Cyndi

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/6/2012 10:25:00 AM

I remember those campfire nights where we made smores, those were incredible nights and lots of fun! It's unfortunate that we don't still do that...We have the space to do that, we just haven't done it in forever! This poem brings back a flood of wonderful memories though Sara! Thank you for that! This is a perfect write my friend! What a delightful and pleasant piece, Great Work!!