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But I Must Try

Nothing I can say Reaches that dark empty space Nothing I can do

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/18/2010 4:33:00 PM
this sounds almost as if you have struggled to the point where you don't care what happens you just want to break through even if you keep trying. this is a very good write, Alan. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 8/3/2010 8:39:00 PM
Luv this one Alan.. very creative and a substantial message as well.. enjoyed your creativity tonight.. with luv..
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