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Burn In Shame

September 29, 2012 -------------------------- Guilty Guilty, I'm to blame Guilty Guilty, Burn in shame The lying game, the dying game Play no more Drown in misery until there's nothing more Guilty Guilty We're all to blame Guilty guilty A blazing inferno covering our shame But in reality the most at fault, Is I I am the one to blame I am guilty Guilty Guilty

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 8/9/2013 8:30:00 PM

The repetition really works to reveal how deep the word guilty is within. Sometimes we may repeat these emotions until they actually really sink in. Then it becomes habit! Don't be too guilty!! Be forgiving! To yourself! Always, Laura

Jonas L. Rozario

Date: 10/24/2012 11:39:00 AM

Very nice write...enjoyed it a lot. Great stuff!