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This poem is about how anger destroys a person and those they love.
It started with just a hint of smoke, A whiff that made the nostrils flare, But raised no alarm. It was fanned by every little slight And look And broken promise And critical word. No one noticed When it finally caught. The smolder now a flame Licking up the wall Of our lives. It was tame, Controllable. Safe. But it spread. It snaked its way Through each member And no one seemed To realize How it rotted flesh And poisoned air. It blistered And peeled way Our dreams Our hopes Leaving scars And immobility In its wake. Walking cadavers In a gutted world.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/7/2014 9:44:00 AM
it'an ingredient of love, I think! Souls who meet are bound to separate and suffermuch pains!
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Date: 1/24/2013 1:33:00 PM
Sadly this is so true. Excellent :) Tanya
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Date: 1/19/2013 7:47:00 PM
YES, this is GREAT!!
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